02.21
학생이 쓴 원문
This is my third time writing and today, I want to write about differences between of Live and Leave which is my homework from last class. First of all, the meanings of the words are different. If someone says he/she lives in a place, it means the place is that person\'s home. Also, we can use this word for opposite of death. On the other hand, the word Leave means we go away from some place and also someone. Actually, last month I moved in from Bundang to here Yeonheedong. So, I can say \"I left Bundang.\" Some times people use this word when they break up with their lovers. In that case, I can say \"He left me.\" By the way, since I moved in, I\'ve been doing tons of housework. I know it\'s because I\'m a kind of obsessive person, cleaning new house is never ending! The house I moved in is too old, worn and dry, so I have to fix and arrange everything. I hope that I can finish this exhausting works in few days.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, May! (^_^)//
Happy Monday!
Thank you for answering your homework.
I appreciate that you even used \'live\' and \'leave\' in different scenarios.
You also used them to describe your situation.
I will see you again on Wednesday. Enjoy the rest of the day.^^
__Teacher Mayleen :)
This is my third time writing and today, I want to write about differences between of Live and Leave which is my homework from last class.
>>> This is my third time writing and today, I want to write about the difference between Live and Leave which is my homework from last class.
First of all, the meanings of the words are different.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: First of all, these words have different meanings.
If someone says he/she lives in a place, it means the place is that person\'s home.
>>> CORRECT
Also, we can use this word for opposite of death.
>>> Also, we can use this word as the opposite of \'die\'.
On the other hand, the word Leave means we go away from some place and also someone.
>>> On the other hand, the word \'leave\' means to go away from someplace or someone.
Actually, last month I moved in from Bundang to here Yeonheedong. So, I can say \"I left Bundang.\" Some times people use this word when they break up with their lovers.
>>> Actually, last month I moved in from Bundang to Yeonheedong, so I can say, \"I left Bundang.\" Sometimes, people use this word when they break up with their lovers/partners.
In that case, I can say \"He left me.\" By the way, since I moved in, I\'ve been doing tons of housework.
>>> In that case, I can say, \"He left me.\" By the way, since I moved in I\'ve been doing tons of housework.
I know it\'s because I\'m a kind of obsessive person, cleaning new house is never ending!
>>> I know that it\'s because I\'m somewhat obsessive-compulsive so cleaning my new house is never ending!
The house I moved in is too old, worn and dry, so I have to fix and arrange everything.
>>> The house I moved in is too old, worn-out and dry, so I have to fix and arrange everything.
I hope that I can finish this exhausting works in few days.
>>> I hope that I can finish these exhausting work in few days.
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