02-25
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What problems do you think someone goes through when they find out they are gay?
The biggest problem would happen to gay people in Korea is actual threates of their lives or rights
>> The biggest and most serious problems that gay people would encounter in Korea are getting actual threats to their lives and/or rights.
As far as I know, still many radical homophobices are standing on Korea.
>> As far as I know, there are still many radical homophobes in Korea.
Hence someone find out they are homosexuals themselves in Korea, they should conceal their sexual orientation.
>> For these reasons, gays normally wouldn\'t come out and admit their sexual preference.
In their lifes, love might be extravagance.
>> For them, they consider love as an extravagance.
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