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2019-03-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>>How do your wants and desires affect your career options and goals? I\'m a person who isn\'t able to live opposing his desires. I\'ve made many choices by my heart and I\'ve never regretted and I will not. Of course there are numerous mistakes on my steps however, I always gladly embrass thoes. So, How do my wants and desires affect my career options and goals? Actually it is 95%. 100% is too much I guess.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


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Cheers!

Jean



>>How do your wants and desires affect your career options and goals?

I\'m a person who isn\'t able to live opposing his desires.

>> I\'m a person who can\'t resist going after his own desires.

 I\'ve made many choices by my heart and I\'ve never regretted and I will not.
>> I\'ve made a number of choices or decisions with my heart, and I\'ve never regretted them, nor will I ever do.

Of course there are numerous mistakes on my steps however, I always gladly embrass thoes.
>> Needless to say that I made countless mistakes along the way, but I\'ll gladly embrace those.

So, How do my wants and desires affect my career options and goals? Actually it is 95%.
>> To answer this question, I\'d say there\'s a 95% chance that my wants and desires would affect my career options and goals. 

100% is too much I guess.

>> correct

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