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학생이 쓴 원문
Since then I have become increasingly interested in design making space.
After that, I am ready to take a new step and I think that I would like to study about Korean historical architecture in order to study space. As soon as the army was discharged, it was the beginning of a korean historical architecture's survey distributed all over the country.
To experience space, to feel is a different impression than a book. I have been interested in history because I have been able to understand the culture of each era while studying Korean historical architecture and studying theory.
This is not limited to the Korean historical architecture, but it has led to interest in art history and architectural history in the East and the West, and it still has a great interest in art history.This enthusiasm for Korean historical architecture leads to the project proposal that won the grand prize at the contest of the Korean interior contest that year.~~~
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Since then I have become increasingly interested in design making space.
>> CORRECT
After that, I am ready to take a new step and I think that I would like to study about Korean historical architecture in order to study space.
After that, I am ready to take a new step and I think that I would like to study about Korean historical architecture in order to study space.
>> After that, I was ready to take a new step and I have decided to pursue the Korean historical architecture in order to study space.
As soon as the army was discharged, it was the beginning of a korean historical architecture\'s survey distributed all over the country.
>> As soon as I was discharged in the army, it was the beginning of my Korean historical architecture\'s survey that was distributed all over the country.
To experience space, to feel is a different impression than a book.
>> To experience space, you need to feel it and it has a different impression than a book.
I have been interested in history because I have been able to understand the culture of each era while studying Korean historical architecture and studying theory.
>> I have been interested in history because I was able to understand the culture of each era while I was studying Korean historical architecture and theory.
This is not limited to the Korean historical architecture, but it has led to interest in art history and architectural history in the East and the West, and it still has a great interest in art history.
>> This is not limited to the Korean historical architecture, but it has led to the interest in art and architectural history in the East and the West, and it still has a great interest in art history.
This enthusiasm for Korean historical architecture leads to the project proposal that won the grand prize at the contest of the Korean interior contest that year.~~~
>> This enthusiasm for Korean historical architecture lead to the project proposal that won the grand prize in the Korean interior contest that year.
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