02.Nov
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I don’t agree with the topic.
In my opinion, it is true that population communicating via the internet and text messaging is increasing according to continuous developing of IT technology. Even though it is true, we still meet face to face. I think sometimes people should meet each other. The communication via the internet is not enough in order to know feel each other. I think that the internet just can help to talk people easily.
I don\'t agree in this topic.
In my opinion, it is true that the rate of people using the internet and text messaging to communicate is increasing according to continuous development of Technology. It may be true at some point, but we still meet face to face. I think sometimes people should meet each other. The communication via the internet is not enough in order to understand each other\'s feelings. I think that the internet could just help people to talk to communicate easily.
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