0207homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Express your opinions.
How would you feel if there weren\'t any holidays?
A.
If there weren\'t any holiday, i don\'t think i will be able to live.
And there won\'t be spend with family and personal life will be gone.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! You wrote good sentences. You only have few mistakes. You have some improvements! ^^
~~May~~
If there weren\'t any holiday, i don\'t think i will be able to live.
>> If there weren\'t any holidays, I don\'t think I will be able to live.
And there won\'t be spend with family and personal life will be gone.
>> And I wouldn\'t spend time with my family and personal life will be gone.
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