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2019-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 May

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HOMEWORK: WRITING TASK How can you live a stress-free life? Can you give three suggestions that would be inexpensive? I give you three suggestions to live a stress free life. The first one is \"meditation\". It helps you slow down and clear your mind. The second one is the yoga. It is best for training the mind and body. The yoga is one of the training the mind and body in India. The last one is deep breathe. It is best for comfortable the mind. Today, I will have some drink with my collegue. Maybe I can\'t take a class tommrow. I am very busy this week. Because I\'m doing an accounting audit. It will be finished by tomrrow. See you.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]! Thank you for sharing your suggestions. Yoga is the best I think. ^^

By the way, you missed the class today. How are you?

~~May~~

I give you three suggestions to live a stress free life.
The first one is \"meditation\".

>> CORRECT
It helps you slow down and clear your mind.

>> It helps you to stay calm and to have a peaceful mind.
The second one is the yoga.

>> The second one is doing yoga.
It is best for training the mind and body.

>> CORRECT
The yoga is one of the training the mind and body in India.

>> Yoga is one of the training the mind and body in India.
The last one is deep breathe.

>> The last one is to deep breathe.
It is best for comfortable the mind.

>> It is best to have a comfortable mind.

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