0218Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thanks for the advice Sir [이름]! I am sure that the businessmen would appreciate it if they would have to hear it from you. ^^
~~May~~
1. Change your mind!
It is the beginning of earning a living.
>> CORRECT
You shouldn\'t work with past ideas.
>> You shouldn\'t work using old ideas.
2. Learn it right to work!
After joining the company your 3 years controll all your life.
>> CORRECT
Before you become a professional, you become a amateur.
>> Before you become a professional, become an amateur first
3. Change your working habits!
>> CORRECT
You work smart and get recognition exactly.
>> You work wisely and get right recognitions.
4. Concentrate on performance!
>> CORRECT
You don\'t work in widely, you work in depth.
>> You don\'t work widely, you work in depth.
Knowledge is power.
>> CORRECT
You sell the performance in stead of time.
>> You sell the performance in a steady time.
Work in the right way by myself.
>> Work properly by yourself.
5. Last one is \" You take a values.
>> The last one is learn values.
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