0218Homework

2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. What advice would you like to give to people starting in business? A. 1. Change your mind! It is the beginning of earning a living. You shouldn\'t work with past ideas. 2. Learn it right to work! After joining the company your 3 years controll all your life. Before you become a professional, you become a amateur. 3. Change your working habits! You work smart and get recognition exactly. 4. Concentrate on performance! You don\'t work in widely, you work in depth. Knowledge is power. You sell the performance in stead of time. work in the right way by myself. 5. Last one is \" You take a values.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for the advice Sir [이름]! I am sure that the businessmen would appreciate it if they would have to hear it from you. ^^

~~May~~

1. Change your mind! 
It is the beginning of earning a living.

>> CORRECT 

You shouldn\'t work with past ideas.

>> You shouldn\'t work using old ideas.
 2. Learn it right to work!
After joining the company your 3 years controll all your life.

>> CORRECT 

Before you become a professional, you become a amateur.

>> Before you become a professional, become an amateur first
 3. Change your working habits! 

>> CORRECT 
You work smart and get recognition exactly.

>> You work wisely and get right recognitions.
 4. Concentrate on performance!

>> CORRECT 
You don\'t work in widely, you work in depth.

>> You don\'t work widely, you work in depth.

Knowledge is power.

>> CORRECT 

You sell the performance in stead of time. 

>> You sell the performance in a steady time. 
Work in the right way by myself.

>> Work properly by yourself.
 5. Last one is \" You take a values.

>> The last one is learn values.

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