02Dec2024_Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Which is more effective in expressing how you feel: Words or Actions?
Answer:
When I\'m in bad mood, I think it\'s ususally better to write than to act.Because sometimes I can threaten the other person.
But, when I\'m happy, I usually express it through my actions! It has a bigger impact than words.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I agree with you. Acting when you’re in a bad mood, especially impulsively, can often lead to saying or doing things that you might regret later.
-T. Sonny
When I\'m in bad mood, I think it\'s ususally better to write than to act.>>When I\'m in a bad mood, I prefer to write my thoughts down rather than act on them.
Because sometimes I can threaten the other person.
>>I sometimes feel the urge to threaten others
But, when I\'m happy, I usually express it through my actions!
But, when I\'m happy, I usually express it through my actions!
>>Correct!
It has a bigger impact than words.
>>It has a stronger impact than words.
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