03.02
학생이 쓴 원문
Having a long holiday, I spend many time in my house with my dog. I wake up in the morning then I eat some breakfast watching TV. After then, I go out for a walk with my dog. I usually take a walk near my house for 30 minutes and sometimes I go to the Ansan where is a mountain near my house for an hour and a half. The Ansan is not steep so it\'s easy to climb. After taking a walk, I come back to my house, clean my dog and drink coffee. I study English for a while and clean my house. Sometimes I take a nap. Often one of my friends come over my house and have dinner together. Actually, before I quit my job last month, I have never had this long holiday. I used to go to my company early in the morning and come back late. I like that I have a ling holiday so I can do whatever I want, on the other side I\'m awkward and bored. Still I feel that I have to do something hard. Maybe that\'s why I\'m studying English. I hope I can spend a rest of my holiday pleasantly.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, May!
I like this very detailed composition. Thank you so much.
I hope you\'re enjoying writing your thoughts down.
It\'ll help improve you vocabulary and grammar skills.
Kindly review the corrections I\'ve given. Practice English whenever you can. :)
__Teacher Mayleen ^^,)
Having a long holiday, I spend many time in my house with my dog.
>>> During a long holiday, I spend most of my time at home with my dog.
I wake up in the morning then I eat some breakfast watching TV.
>>> After waking up, I eat breakfast while watching TV.
After then, I go out for a walk with my dog.
>>> After that, I take my dog for a walk outside.
I usually take a walk near my house for 30 minutes and sometimes I go to the Ansan where is a mountain near my house for an hour and a half.
>>> I usually take a walk near my house for 30 minutes or go to An-san, a mountain near my house, and hike for about an hour and a half.
The Ansan is not steep so it\'s easy to climb.
>>> An-san is not sleep so it\'s easy to climb.
After taking a walk, I come back to my house, clean my dog and drink coffee.
>>> After talking a walk, I come back home, bathe my dog and drink coffee.
I study English for a while and clean my house.
>>> I study English for a while then clean my house.
Sometimes I take a nap.
>>> CORRECT [Sometimes, I take a nap.]
>>> OR: I sometimes take a nap.
Often one of my friends come over my house and have dinner together.
>>> One of my friends comes over to my house and we have dinner together.
Actually, before I quit my job last month, I have never had this long holiday.
>>> CORRECT
I used to go to my company early in the morning and come back late.
>>> CORRECT
I like that I have a ling holiday so I can do whatever I want, on the other side I\'m awkward and bored.
>>> I like that I have a long break so I can do whatever I want, on the other hand, I\'m starting to get bored.
Still I feel that I have to do something hard.
>>> I still feel like I have to do well at something.
Maybe that\'s why I\'m studying English.
>>> CORRECT
I hope I can spend a rest of my holiday pleasantly.
>>> I hope I can spend the rest of my holiday pleasantly.
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