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2019-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. homeless 2. under the influence of drugs/alcohol 3. superior 4. intoxicated 5. inebriated 1. Homeless people are chronic problems of Seoul Station. 2. She was under the influence of ataractic already when he visited her apartment. 3. He strongly believes himself, he is a superior person more than anyone. That\'s why he doesn\'t have friends. 4. I\'m proud of myself to join AA finally, dear fellowes. I had been intoxicated last 20 years. 5. Sir, you\'re inebriated already. You\'d better get out.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. homeless
2. under the influence of drugs/alcohol
3. superior
4. intoxicated
5. inebriated

1. Homeless people are chronic problems of Seoul Station.
>> The homeless people at Seoul Station are just one of the chronic problems of the city.

2. She was under the influence of ataractic already when he visited her apartment.
>> She was already under the influence of ataractic drugs when he visited her apartment.

3. He strongly believes himself, he is a superior person more than anyone. That\'s why he doesn\'t have friends.
>> He is so narcissistic that he believes himself to be superior than others that\'s why he doesn\'t have friends.

4. I\'m proud of myself to join AA finally, dear fellowes. I had been intoxicated last 20 years.
>> I\'m proud to have finally joined AA, dear fellows. I had been intoxicated in the last 20 years.

5. Sir, you\'re inebriated already. You\'d better get out.
>> correct

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