[03/06]Which country would you love to visit in the future? And why :D
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If I\'m given the chance, I want to visit Morocco because there are many awesome girls. I heard that Morocco girls have a beautiful mind style from my colleague who has visited before. Also, there are many exotic places for sightseeing and excellent foods. So, I would love to visit Morocco in the future.
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If I\'m given the chance, I want to visit Morocco because there are many awesome girls.
>> If I\'m given the chance, I want to visit Morocco because there are a lot of awesome girls.
I heard that Morocco girls have a beautiful mind style from my colleague who has visited before.
>> CORRECT
Also, there are many exotic places for sightseeing and excellent foods.
>> Also, there are many exotic places for sightseeing and excellent food.
So, I would love to visit Morocco in the future.
>> CORRECT
kkkkk \'awesome girls hahaha wow haha
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