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2019-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. On a clear day 2. you can admire 3. view is much better 4. average 5. standard 1. As his wish, he has passed away on a clear spring day. 2. I didn\'t like Gogh\'s works just like you because, people too love those untill, I watched his painting in real life. I\'m pretty sure that you can admire those masterpieces as well if you visit this exhibition. 3. Haeundae beach\'s view is much better than Songjung beach\'s. 4. He was an average sort of salesman. 5. The Impressionists rejected to follow the standard of arts in their era.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. On a clear day
2. you can admire
3. view is much better
4. average
5. standard

1. As his wish, he has passed away on a clear spring day.

>> He got his wish to pass away on a clear spring day.

2. I didn\'t like Gogh\'s works just like you because, people too love those untill, I watched his painting in real life. I\'m pretty sure that you can admire those masterpieces as well if you visit this exhibition.
>> I didn\'t like Gogh\'s works just like most people until I saw his painting myself. I\'m pretty sure that you will admire those masterpieces as well if you visit this exhibition.

3. Haeundae beach\'s view is much better than Songjung beach\'s.
>> Haeundae beach\'s view is much better than Songjung\'s.

4. He was an average sort of salesman.
>> He was an average salesman.

>> or: He was a sort of an average salesman.

5. The Impressionists rejected to follow the standard of arts in their era.

>> The Impressionists refused to follow the standard of arts in their era.

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