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2019-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. sue 2. idle 3. pass away 4. commercial land 5. unproductive 1. I swear to god, I will sue you and destroy your life, understand? 2. He has been idle over ten years. 3. She still vividly remembers that spring day when sky was high, birds were singing and everything was going fine until that car crash happened. Her parents passed away instantly. 4. After moving into the Molten commercial land, he couldn\'t s[이름]p well because of noise. 5. He decided to change his unproductive machines.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. sue
2. idle
3. pass away
4. commercial land
5. unproductive

1. I swear to god, I will sue you and destroy your life, understand?

>> I swear to god; I will sue you and destroy your life, understand?

2. He has been idle over ten years.
>> He has been idle for over ten years.

3. She still vividly remembers that spring day when sky was high, birds were singing and everything was going fine until that car crash happened. Her parents passed away instantly.
>> She still vividly remembers that spring day when the sky was high, birds were singing and everything was going fine until that car crash happened. Her parents passed away instantly.

4. After moving into the Molten commercial land, he couldn\'t s[이름]p well because of noise.
>> correct

5. He decided to change his unproductive machines.

>> correct

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