03/21
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh my god.
When I pushed the 'Enter' button on the title, the browser was closed.
That's why I make a composition again here.
I check a pronunciation of 'position' but yours and mine were different each other. Your pronunciation is 'position [puh-zish-uhn]'
However, my pronunciation is pə|zɪʃn. I found this pronunciation from the homepage of NAVER. And I request to advise a pronunciation on the basis of the internet because yours was not matched with what I know. ^^
It's only my hope.
The essay title is also difficult to define. ^^
Anyway, there will be many answers according to the personnel.
I think that happiness is feeling happy without any stress and be satisfied
by oneself.
However, happiness is not provided from others and is not decided.
Even though two people have the same condition, a person can feel happiness but another person can't feel happiness. It's up to their wish.
It is my private opinion. ^^
See you~!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! It is a TGIF! Thank God it\'s Friday. The most awaited day has finally come...kkk.
About the pronunciation of \"position\" please check DICTIONARY. COM. or this site:
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/position?s=t
I use this dictionary because it use the standard pronunciation. There are different pronunciation of the word depends on the dictionary that you are using so the dictionary that you use is also right.^^. It is also the same when you are using British and American accent which have different pronunciation. English is really a crazy language. ^^ kkk..
In addition, it is great that you are wondering, it means you really are eager to learn.^^
Please check it, so that you will not be confused.^^. I hope it will be clear to you.
Anyway, you hold the class for today, I hope you are doing fine.
Have a great weekend! Bye bye..kkk..^^
-T. Naomi
Oh my god.
>>correct
>>OR: Oh my God! ( you are expressing feeling, so use exclamation point...kkk)When I pushed the \'Enter\' button on the title, the browser was closed.
>>When I presses the \'Enter\' button on the tittle, the browser closed.That\'s why I make a composition again here.>>That\'s why I make another composition here.
>>OR: That\'s why I compose again.I check a pronunciation of \'position\' but yours and mine were different each other.
>>i check the pornunciation of position but yours and mine were different from each other.Your pronunciation is \'position [puh-zish-uhn]\' >>Your pronunciation is \'position [puh-zish-uhn]\'
However, my pronunciation is pə|zɪʃn.
>>correct- maybe there is an error here, but it is ok^^
I found this pronunciation from the homepage of NAVER.
>>correctAnd I request to advise a pronunciation on the basis of the internet because yours was not matched with what I know. ^^>>And I seek an advise on pronunciation basing it on the internet because yours was not matched with what I know.^^>>OR: And I search the pronunciation on the internet because yours was not matched with what I know.^^It\'s only my hope.>>It\'s my only hope.The essay title is also difficult to define. ^^
>>Happiness is difficult to define.
>>OR: The question is difficult to answer.Anyway, there will be many answers according to the personnel.
>>Anyway, there will be many different answer or opinion depending to the person.I think that happiness is feeling happy without any stress and be satisfiedby oneself.
>>correct
However, happiness is not provided from others and is not decided.
>>However, happiness is not provided by others and is not a decision.Even though two people have the same condition, a person can feel happiness but another person can\'t feel happiness.
>>Even though two people have the same condition, the first person can feel happiness but the other person can\'t feel happiness.
>>If there are two people in the same situation, the first person is happy but the other one is not happy.It\'s up to their wish.
>>correct
>>OR: It is up to them.It is my private opinion. ^^
>>correctSee you~!
>>correct
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