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2019-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. image 2. beyond repair 3. version 4. major responsibilities 5. main task 1. Edward Curtis was the first photographer who attempted to capture the images of Indian\'s traditional cultures which were diminishing. 2. His parent\'s marital health looks beyond repair. 3. This is a poor version of Kimchi. Please stop putting ketchup into and save its dignity. 4. Major responsibilities of raising a cat make me tired. 5. The main task of this era is respecting diversity.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


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Cheers!

Jean


1. image
2. beyond repair
3. version
4. major responsibilities
5. main task

1. Edward Curtis was the first photographer who attempted to capture the images of Indian\'s traditional cultures which were diminishing.
>> correct


 2. His parent\'s marital health looks beyond repair.
>> correct 


 3. This is a poor version of Kimchi. Please stop putting ketchup into and save its dignity.
>>  This is a poor version of Kimchi. Please stop putting ketchup in it and save its dignity.


 4. Major responsibilities of raising a cat make me tired.
>> The major responsibilities of raising a cat make me tired.


 5. The main task of this era is respecting diversity.

>> The main task of this era is to respect diversity.

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