03/21 homework

2012-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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What part of your life would you like to happen again? Why? Jannette hi~ good afternoon^^ I wanna good student from today! it sounds great, aren't you?^^ when I was high school student,I had took a enrtnce examination and I failed my university entrance examination. At that time I was really upset and regret becuase I did my best. Studyinhg for the university enteranve exam is like hell I can't explain it. But it is very competitive. So excessive competition and the pressure of test make me destroyed. Korean risked their life for the test.But I couldn't endure it. In other words, when I was failed I ran a way that path So if I go back to that time, I will enjoy and face to my trouble!

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms [이름]!^^ Wow, I\'m pretty impressed with your courage to open up this experience of yours. Failing is never easy. When we fall down, it takes time for us to get back to our knees and stand back again. I do understand the feeling Ms [이름], because I also failed a national exam. And I tell you, it was the most stressing feeling I ever had. Nevertheless, I learned a lot form that experience. I realized that I have to give my all everytime. You too Ms [이름], you can do it. Believe in yourself and never stopped doing your best. God is not a sleeping God, He sees your hardships, someday everything you do will pay off. Fighting!! And never lose your sweet laughter.  Have a good evening for now, I\'ll see you later in class.^^ T.Janette~  What part of your life would you like to happen again? Why? >> Correct!^^  Jannette hi~ good afternoon^^>> Correct!^^  I wanna good student from today!>> I wanna be a good student from today! >> I wanna be a good student starting today! it sounds great, aren\'t you?^^>> It sounds great, isn\'t it?^^  when I was high school student,I had took a enrtnce examination and I failed my university entrance examination.>> When I was a high school student, I had taken an entrance examnination and I failed my university entrance examination. >> Be careful with the use of article (a, an, the)  At that time I was really upset and regret becuase I did my best.>> At that time, I was really upset and I regretted because I did my best. >> Be careful with spelling and punctuation^^  Studyinhg for the university enteranve exam is like hell >> Studying for the university entrance exam is like hell. >> Be careful with spelling.^^  I can\'t explain it. But it is very competitive.>> I can\'t explain it, but it was very competitive. >> Past tense.^^ So excessive competition and the pressure of test make me destroyed.>> So the excessive competition and the pressure of the test made me fall down. >> Be careful with the use of articles and the words that you use.^^  Korean risked their life for the test.But I couldn\'t endure it.>> Koreans risk their lived for the test but I couldn\'t endure it.  In other words, when I was failed I ran a way that path >> In other words, when I failed, I ran away.  So if I go back to that time, I will enjoy and face to my trouble! >> So if I go back to that time, I will enjoy and face my trouble!   

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