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2019-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. techie 2. the possibility of 3. overseas 4. high-paying job 5. certain 1. He knows lots of techies. That\'s why his computer is always in a good condition. 2. Always keep in mind the possibility of fire. 3. She set her new year resolution to get overseas trips. 4. High-paying jobs aren\'t always the key of happiness. 5. I\'m not certain I had seen him. But on high probilities and for certain reasons, he might be there to get a surgery by a certain Dr. [Name].

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. techie
2. the possibility of
3. overseas
4. high-paying job
5. certain

1. He knows lots of techies. That\'s why his computer is always in a good condition.

>> He knows a number of techies that\'s why his computer is always well-maintained.

2. Always keep in mind the possibility of fire.

>> correct

3. She set her new year resolution to get overseas trips.

>> Her New Year\'s resolution is to go on overseas trips.

4. High-paying jobs aren\'t always the key of happiness.
>> High-paying jobs aren\'t always the key to happiness.

5. I\'m not certain I had seen him. But on high probilities and for certain reasons, he might be there to get a surgery by a certain Dr. [Name].

>> I\'m not certain I had seen him but there was a high probability and for certain reasons, he was there to get a surgery by a certain Dr. [Name]. [Note: Word repetition in a single sentence is not good writing.]

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