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2014-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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Good day, my teacher ~ ! First of all, I want to say I'm sorry. I said I would make my composition in last lesson. But I didn't do that. When I came back to my house, my wife and her friend had been talking so I should take care of my baby. AS a result, I forgot my job. ^^ Anyway, how was your weekend? I was very busy during the weekend. Because I moved to Paju city by myself as you know. We can talk more in our class. Please refer to my free time and compare with your schedule. I'm waiting your reply. Have a nice day. 1830 get out of my office 1910 arrive at home ** 1910~2030 my free time 2030~2230 study with my friends ** 2230~2400 my free time

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!   Thanks for this message :) My weekend was wonderful. Hope yours was too. Actually, my schedule was kind of hectic and unpredictable these days. It keeps on changing, so I can\'t give you an exact free time. There have been some changes again this week! You can coordinate with our Korean manager regarding this matter. See you in class :) ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections:   Good day, my teacher ~ !>> correct :) >> OR: Good day, teacher!First of all, I want to say I\'m sorry. >> correct :) >> OR: First of all, I want to apologize. I said I would make my composition in last lesson. >> I told you I will make my composition last meeting.  But I didn\'t do that. >> But I was not able to. When I came back to my house, my wife and her friend had been talking so I should take care of my baby. >> When I got home, my wife and her friend were talking, so I have to take care of my baby. AS a result, I forgot my job. ^^>> correct :) >> OR: As a result, I forgot to do my task.Anyway, how was your weekend? >> correct :) >> OR: How was your weekend anyway?  I was very busy during the weekend. >> correct :) >> OR: During the weekend, I was very busy. Because I moved to Paju city by myself as you know. >> Because as I\'ve told you, I moved to Paju city by myself.We can talk more in our class.>> correct :) >> OR: I can tell you more in class.Please refer to my free time and compare with your schedule. >> Please refer to my free time and compare it with your schedule.I\'m waiting your reply. >> I\'m waiting for your reply.Have a nice day.>> correct :)1830 get out of my office >> 18:30- I leave my office1910 arrive at home >> 19:10 - I will arrive at home** 1910~2030 my free time >> 19:10-20:30- my free time2030~2230 study with my friends >> 20:30-22:30 - I study with my friends** 2230~2400 my free time >> 22:30-24:00- my free time

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