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2014-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Naomi

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Great to see you, T.Naomi~! We had some trouble in our class because of my pronunciation. However, it was a good talk, wasn't it? Haha. Well.. I'm not sure when I exceed my limits. I had no idea. Even if I had not an experience in my mind, I choose the last TOEIC test if I should select any experience. I felt the reading part of the test was difficult to get enough points, but I got many points than what I thought. So I felt happy and wonderful. However, when I confirmed the listening part of TOEIC, I was really disappointed with the points. I will do my lesson, reminding your corrections regarding to my pronunciation. But I think it is difficult to follow your corrections to Korean. I already knew about the pronunciation of 'f' and 'v' sound, however, when I talked to you, I should think about sentences which is spoken. But I'm going to try my best. I think that I'll be better if I read more books in English. See you, teacher!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]^^   Thank you for taking your time to do this homework. Learning is always challenging. I admire your attitude of not giving up and doing your best. Don\'t worry about having trouble in class. The important thing is you are improving. Be careful with your verb tenses and subject and verb agreements and about your pronunciation just keep on practicing and learn from your mistakes. Practice makes perfect.^^   Take care^^   T.Noami Here are some of my corrections for you:   Great to see you, T.Naomi~! >> CORRECTWe had some trouble in our class because of my pronunciation. >> CORRECT OR> My pronunciation caused some troubles in class.However, it was a good talk, wasn\'t it? Haha.>> CORRECT OR> However, We had a good conversation, didn\'t we?Well..I\'m not sure when I exceed my limits. I had no idea. >> Well..I\'m not sure when I would exceed my limits. I have no idea.Even if I had not an experience in my mind, I choose the last TOEIC test if I should select any experience.>> Even if I had not experienced it in my mind, I will choose the last part of the TOEIC if I would select an experience.I felt the reading part of the test was difficult to get enough points, but I got many points than what I thought.>> I felt that the reading part of the test was difficult to get enough points, but I got more points than I expected. So I felt happy and wonderful. However, when I confirmed the listening part of TOEIC, I was really disappointed with the points.>> CORRECT OR> I felt happy and wonderful, but when I got the listening part of TOEIC, I felt disappointed with the points.I will do my lesson, reminding your corrections regarding to my pronunciation. >> I will study my lesson and be reminded of your corrections regarding my pronunciation.  But I think it is difficult to follow your corrections to Korean. >> But I think it is difficult to follow your corrections in Korean. . I already knew about the pronunciation of \'f\' and \'v\' sound, however, when I talked to you, I should think about sentences which is spoken. But I\'m going to try my best. >> I already know about the pronunciation of \'f\' and \'v\' sound, however, when I talked to you, I should think about the sentences which are spoken. But I\'m going to try my best.I think that I\'ll be better if I read more books in English. >> CORRECT OR> I will improve by reading more English books.See you, teacher!! >>CORRECT OR> See you later Teacher!!

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