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2019-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. amount of 2. overall 3. progress 4. basis 5. infidelity 1. The amount of water we need to drink for a day is 2L. 2. Overall, Edward Hopper\'s techniques were bad but we still consider him as a great figurative artist in the 20th century. 3. Alfred Stieglitz made great progress in the modernization of photography. 4. This paper is on the basis of the supersymmetric theory, 5. Their marital crisis was started with Olly\'s infidelities.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. amount of
2. overall
3. progress
4. basis
5. infidelity

1. The amount of water we need to drink for a day is 2L.
>> correct

2. Overall, Edward Hopper\'s techniques were bad but we still consider him as a great figurative artist in the 20th century.

>> correct

3. Alfred Stieglitz made great progress in the modernization of photography.
>> correct

4. This paper is on the basis of the supersymmetric theory,
>> This paper is based on the supersymmetric theory.

5. Their marital crisis was started with Olly\'s infidelities.

>> Their marital crisis started with Olly\'s infidelities.

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