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2019-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. consecutive days 2. to decide 3. appropriate 4. requirement 5. monitor 1. A tsunami ravaged Indonesia for the third consecutive days. 2. To decide without regret, check all possible options. 3. The technique Sfumato was born in the appropriate age, Renaissance 4. To satisfy our minimum enterence requirement, all applicants need to prepare TOEIC score 900 points or more. 5. She bought a webcam for monitoring her baby.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. consecutive days
2. to decide
3. appropriate
4. requirement
5. monitor

1. A tsunami ravaged Indonesia for the third consecutive days.
>> correct

2. To decide without regret, check all possible options.
>> correct

3. The technique Sfumato was born in the appropriate age, Renaissance
>> The technique Sfumato was born in an appropriate age, Renaissance.

4. To satisfy our minimum enterence requirement, all applicants need to prepare TOEIC score 900 points or more.
>> To satisfy our minimum entrance requirements, all applicants need to prepare a TOEIC score of at least 900 points or more.

5. She bought a webcam for monitoring her baby.

>> She bought a webcam to monitor her baby.

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