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If you want to introduce a project proposal using for Korean historical architecture, it is impossible to explain it briefly .. However, the most important feature of Korean architecture is that it conforms to nature and contains user's culture. Almost every building in the Orient has a cultural background from ancient times, and the space division and shape are formed accordingly. It transformed the shape of the architecture which was built by the past cultural and environmental condition which is different from the contemporary problems of the building materials and adapted the modern architecture to the modern age and succeeded the spirit and carried out experimental work. I think that the effort to develop the spirit of the times was probably a good evaluation because it is a happy space with only the remaining heritage without needing to distinguish between the era of Korean historical architecture, silk worship of Buddhism and the era of Confucian worship.~~~~
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If you want to introduce a project proposal using for Korean historical architecture, it is impossible to explain it briefly..
>> If you want to introduce a project proposal using a Korean historical architecture, it is impossible to explain it briefly.
However, the most important feature of Korean architecture is that it conforms to nature and contains user\'s culture.
>> However, the most important feature of a Korean architecture is that it conforms to nature and contain one\'s culture.
I think that the effort to develop the spirit of the times was probably a good evaluation because it is a happy space with only the remaining heritage without needing to distinguish between the era of
>> I think the effort to maintain the old spirit and culture was a good way to preserve the last remaining heritage without needing to distinguish between the era of
Korean historical architecture, silk worship of Buddhism and the era of Confucian worship.~~~~
>> CORRECT
>> If you want to introduce a project proposal using a Korean historical architecture, it is impossible to explain it briefly.
However, the most important feature of Korean architecture is that it conforms to nature and contains user\'s culture.
>> However, the most important feature of a Korean architecture is that it conforms to nature and contain one\'s culture.
I think that the effort to develop the spirit of the times was probably a good evaluation because it is a happy space with only the remaining heritage without needing to distinguish between the era of
>> I think the effort to maintain the old spirit and culture was a good way to preserve the last remaining heritage without needing to distinguish between the era of
Korean historical architecture, silk worship of Buddhism and the era of Confucian worship.~~~~
>> CORRECT
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