03.Nov
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
In my opinion, the most important thing in successful life is just do it and believe myself without give up.
Meaning of “successful life” is different depend on each person.
Some people said SUCCESS means like a wealth or reputation. But I don’t think that. Although somebody is wealthy, they are not satisfied with their life.
In my case, when end of my life, if I have a friend who can say to me “I respect you. You did good job”, regardless of person as my husband, children or whoever, I can say that my life is successful.
In my opinion, the most important thing to being successful in life is to just do whatever I like and believe in myself without giving up. The meaning of \"successful life\" depends on people. Some said, SUCCESS means wealth and having a reputation, but I don\'t think it that way. Although, somebody may be wealthy, they are not satisfied and fully happy in their lives. In my case, when my life ends, and a friend told me that \"I respect you, you did a good job.\" regardless of who the person is, I could say that I am successful.
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