0303 homework

2014-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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Should students be allowed to have cell phones in elementary and high schools? I think not allow to have cell phones. Recentlly many students have cell phones. They are use a lot of time to cell phones. They are needs reading time and activity but waste one's time for cell phones.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Miss [이름]!

Thank you so much for answering your homework.^^

I think I agree with your opinion that students should spend their time doing other activities rather than playing/manipulating their cellphones.

Anyway, please don\'t forget to read the corrections I made below.

See you in class!

~T. Mona

Should students be allowed to have cell phones in elementary and high schools?

I think not allow to have cell phones.

>>I think they should not be allowed to have cellphones.
Recentlly many students have cell phones.

>>Correct!
>>Recently many students have cell phones.(careful with your spelling)
They are use a lot of time to cell phones.

>>They spend so much time playing with their cell[hones.

They are needs reading time and activity but waste one\'s time for cell phones.

>>They need much reading time and to do other activities instead they waste their time using their cellphones.

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