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nowadays,death penalty is a big issue in korea as incident about murder happens a lot in korea. at present we have a death penalty but we didnt execute for a decade more so korea is called practically the country that doesnt execute criminal. honestly i dont argee with people who are for a death penalty. i completely agree that family of victims will have very severe pain for their whole life. but that doesnt mean death penalty will erase their pain. secondly,people who was executed might turn out they was an innocent. but nothing will happen after they was executed. nobody can survive them so that we should be considerate when it comes to a death penalty. finally, a death penalty doesnt always make crimes decrease. some of state in usa implemented a death penalty but conversely the rate of crime got higher than before. so i am able to suggest a death penalty doesnt always give us a prevent for murder or severe crime. we would be able to treat criminal by sending them a jail.

Well done [이름], If I death penalty is not needed in your country then, it shouldn\'t be implemented. Because killing people is a crime. Anyway, please capitalize the first letter of our sentence.  See you tomorrow! Here are my corrections! T. Sheela nowadays,death penalty is a big issue in korea as incident about murder happens a lot in korea. >> Nowadays,death penalty has become a big issue in korea for people who commeted murder. at present we have a death penalty but we didnt execute for a decade more so korea is called practically the country that doesnt execute criminal. >>At present, we have death penalthy but we didn\'t execute it for decades. That is why Korea is called a country that doesn\'t execute criminals. honestly i dont argee with people who are for a death penalty. >>Honesly, I don\'t agree with people who are in favor of death penalty. i completely agree that family of victims will have very severe pain for their whole life. >> I completely agree that family of the victims will feel pain for their entire life. but that doesnt mean death penalty will erase their pain. >>But that doesn\'t mean that death penalty will cease their pain. secondly,people who was executed might turn out they was an innocent. >> Secondly, people who were executed might be innocent. but nothing will happen after they was executed. >>But nothing can be done since they were already executed. nobody can survive them so that we should be considerate when it comes to a death penalty. >>Nobody can revive them, So, we should consider more about death penalty. finally, a death penalty doesnt always make crimes decrease. >>Correct! some of state in usa implemented a death penalty but conversely the rate of crime got higher than before. >>Some states in U.S.A implement death penalty but the crime rate got higher than before. so i am able to suggest a death penalty doesnt always give us a prevent for murder or severe crime. >>So, in my opinion, death penalty doesn\'t always prevent muderers and criminals do crime. we would be able to treat criminal by sending them a jail. >> We treat criminals by sending them to jail.