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2013-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

I started to teach English to a 12years old student. I posted up my profile about my careerto let people see it. During a couple of weeks, nobody called me so i nearly gave up and was disappointed to myself cause nobody asked me to teach them. But all of sudden someone sent me the message asking me to teach once for free to know how i teach and my ablility for teaching. I accepted it and went to her home. I taught her 9years old son who was very naughty guy. After i did a free class, i got a call and she said he like u and want to learn English with me. The moment i listened it from her, i couldnt help feeiling happy. So i accepted her proposal, i am going to teach him. Above all, i am so happy to figure out how to make money going to my uni. Frankly speaking, i feel guilty a little bit cause i am not surely english master. But i am going to do my best to satisfy him and his mother. That also must push me into English. I should keep learning english and improve myself

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Congratulations! I am proud of you!!! I am know you will be a good teacher and be confident to your self. I know you can do it and I am all ears if you need some help. See you! T. Sheela I started to teach English to a 12years old student. >> Correct! I posted up my profile about my careerto let people see it. >> I posted my career profile for other people to see. During a couple of weeks, nobody called me so i nearly gave up and was disappointed to myself cause nobody asked me to teach them. >> For the couple of weeks, nobody called me so, I nearly gave up and was disappointed to myself cause no one asked me to teach them. But all of sudden someone sent me the message asking me to teach once for free to know how i teach and my ablility for teaching. >> But all of the sudden, someone sent me a message asking me to teach once for free to know how I teach and my ablility in teaching. I accepted it and went to her home. >> Correct! I taught her 9years old son who was very naughty guy. >> I taught her 9 years old son who was a very naughty guy. After i did a free class, i got a call and she said he like u and want to learn English with me. >> After I did the free class, I got a call and she said that her son like me and wanted to learn English with me. The moment i listened it from her, i couldnt help feeiling happy. >> The moment I listened to her, I couldnt help feeling happy about it. So i accepted her proposal, i am going to teach him. >> So, I accepted her proposal and I am going to teach him. Above all, i am so happy to figure out how to make money going to my uni. >> Above all, I am so happy to figure out on how to make money to support my study in the University. Frankly speaking, i feel guilty a little bit cause i am not surely english master. >> Frankly speaking, I feel guilty a little bit cause I am not sure about my English skill. But I am going to do my best to satisfy him and his mother. >>Correct! That also must push me into English. I should keep learning english and improve myself >> That also must push me into studying English. I should keep on learning English and improve myself.

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