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It's been a while to work out at gym since i paused my exercise 3months ago.
I enrolled a boxing and fitness club to keep my shape cause my muscles are getting shrinked. It was very tough for me to work out for quite long time which was pretty much easy when i worked out very hard 3months ago. i learnt a lot from it that a regularity is a point for our life. we would improve ourselves to do something regularly. i usually do a push up manytimes. then i jump a rope to warm up and start a boxing which is very hard and scaring but i feel very happy and fresh after doing up it. as long as i start a boxing, i should balance a boxing and a study. boxing is not only important for me to keep my shape but also studying is very important to get a job in the close my future. i need to make a strategy about my time to make a balance between two of these. Anyway, now that i think tomorrow is a weekend, i am so happy. i am going to make a schedule to make the most of weekend.
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Hello [이름],
I think you are good in balancing your time. You study, exercise and teach a 9 years old kid. I hope I am like you. Anyway, have a wonderful weekend!
T.Sheela
It\'s been a while to work out at gym since i paused my exercise 3months ago.
>>It\'s been a while since I have worked out at the gym. I didn\'t exercise for 3 months.I enrolled a boxing and fitness club to keep my shape cause my muscles are getting shrinked.
>> I enrolled in a boxing and fitness club to keep my shape cause my muscles shrink.
It was very tough for me to work out for quite long time which was pretty much easy when i worked out very hard 3months ago.
>> It was very tough on me to work out after a long time of not exercising for about 3 months ago, it was pretty much easy.
i learnt a lot from it that a regularity is a point for our life.
>>YOU MEAN TO SAY: I learned that doing exercise regularly will make us fullfill our goal.
>>( I am sorry but I can understand what you really mean here)
we would improve ourselves to do something regularly.
>> We should improve ourselves to do better things.
i usually do a push up manytimes.
>> I usually do a lot of push ups.
then i jump a rope to warm up and start a boxing which is very hard and scaring but i feel very happy and fresh after doing up it.
>>Then I jumped rope to warm up and start boxing which is very hard and scary thing to do. But, I feel very happry and fresh after doing it.
as long as i start a boxing, i should balance a boxing and a study.
>>Once I start boxing, I should know how to balance boxing and studying.
boxing is not only important for me to keep my shape but also studying is very important to get a job in the close my future.
>> Boxing is not that important for me but studying is very important so that I can get a job in the future.
i need to make a strategy about my time to make a balance between two of these.
>>I need to have a strategy to balance my time for the two.
Anyway, now that i think tomorrow is a weekend, i am so happy.
>>Anyway, tomorrow is weekend and I am so happy about it.
i am going to make a schedule to make the most of weekend.
>>I am going to make a schedule for my entire weekend.
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