[0318]home work
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.What kind of sports do you enjoy?
A. I enjoy playing the basketball, baseball and football. In spring, I sometime playing the Golf with my colleague. Now I can\'t play anysports because of Corona virus.
You should be careful, too. Have a great day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
That was a quick response. Thanks for the enthusiasm you are always showing in class:)
That was a quick response. Thanks for the enthusiasm you are always showing in class:)
-Rachel
I enjoy playing the basketball, baseball and football.
>> I enjoy playing basketball, baseball and football. ( we don\'t use the for sports)
In spring, I sometime playing the Golf with my colleague. Now I can\'t play any sports because of Corona virus.
>> In spring, I sometimes play golf with my colleagues, but now I can\'t play any sport because of the corona virus.
You should be careful, too. Have a great day.
You should be careful, too. Have a great day.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
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