[0327]Homwwork
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A. What could make you fitter and healthier?
B. I think that is a exercise for fitter and healthier exactly. Maybe everyone will think so. The next thing, that is healthy food which they think healthy. I someyimes enjoy eating vegitables, chicken breast and fruits. What make me fitter and healthier are exercise and healthy food. This one is best of best in the world.
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Hi Sir,
Thank you for taking some time to respond to your given homework. That was a nice response/
-Rachel
I think that is a exercise for fitter and healthier exactly. Maybe everyone will think so.
>> I think that exercising will make me fitter and healthier, and maybe everyone does too.
The next thing, that is healthy food which they think healthy.
>>The next thing is eating healthy foods.
I sometimes enjoy eating vegetables, chicken breast and fruits.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
What makes me fitter and healthier are exercise and healthy food. This one is best of best in the world.
>> correct
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