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2019-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. entire 2. convenience 3. newly hired 4. scope 5. managed 1. Entire forest was burnt because of one little match. 2. Just let me know at your convenience. 3. A newly hired manager is too impersonal. 4. In fact, moveable scope of arms are quite limited. 5. Rather than f[이름]ing, he should have magnaged that situation.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. entire
2. convenience
3. newly hired
4. scope
5. managed

1. Entire forest was burnt because of one little match.

>> The entire forest was burnt because of one little match.

2. Just let me know at your convenience.
>> correct

3. A newly hired manager is too impersonal.
>> correct

4. In fact, moveable scope of arms are quite limited.
>> In fact, the moveable scope of arms are quite limited. [What does moveable scope of arms mean in this sentence?]

5. Rather than f[이름]ing, he should have magnaged that situation.

>> Rather than f[이름]ing, he should have managed that situation.

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