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2019-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. inquiry 2. dealt with 3. suggestion box 4. widen 5. anonymous 1. 98% of inquiries sent in this year are meaningless or ridiculous. 2. Muybridge had dealt with landscape untill he got interests to motions. 3. Suggestion boxes in army never guarantee your annonymity. 4. To widen and to foster your observation, we have provided various puzzles since 1970. 5. One anonymous latter has changed this village forever.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. inquiry
2. dealt with
3. suggestion box
4. widen
5. anonymous

1. 98% of inquiries sent in this year are meaningless or ridiculous.

>> correct

2. Muybridge had dealt with landscape untill he got interests to motions.
>> Muybridge had dealt with landscape until he became interested in motions.

3. Suggestion boxes in army never guarantee your annonymity.
>> Suggestion boxes at the army never guarantees your anonymity.

4. To widen and to foster your observation, we have provided various puzzles since 1970.

>> correct

5. One anonymous latter has changed this village forever.

>> One anonymous letter has changed this village forever.

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