04.04 homework

2019-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. drizzling 2. mentally ready 3. enthusiasm 4. tensed with excitement 5. pumped up 1. It suddenly started to be drizzling. My mood became depressed after watching window. 2. I am mentally ready for facing result on my test. 3. I got an enthusiasm after her music which make my heart more pumped up. 4. Watching or Buying cosmetics make me tensed with excitement. There are lot of pretty things in the world. 5. Construction noise over the window seriously pumped me up and then i didn\'t control my anger.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. drizzling
2. mentally ready
3. enthusiasm
4. tensed with excitement
5. pumped up

1. It suddenly started to be drizzling. My mood became depressed after watching window.

> I became depressed when it suddenly started to drizzle. 


 2. I am mentally ready for facing result on my test.

>> I am mentally ready to face the result of my test. 


 3. I got an enthusiasm after her music which make my heart more pumped up.

>> I felt so much enthusiasm after listening to her music. I was pumped up. 


 4. Watching or Buying cosmetics make me tensed with excitement. There are lot of pretty things in the world.

>> Looking or buying cosmetics make me tensed with excitement. There are a lot of pretty things in the world. 


 5. Construction noise over the window seriously pumped me up and then i didn\'t control my anger.

>> The noise coming from the construction near my place made me flare up.

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