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2019-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. out of focus 2. tragedy 3. secretly 4. realize 5. embarrassing 1. Pictorialists were fond of employing out of focus quality. 2. One of the saddest tragedy of modern society is he is my lecturer. 3. He got a birthday present of his mother secretly. 4. The last thing he will realize is she doesn\'t love him since the beginning. 5. His joke was quite embrrassing for elderlies.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. out of focus
2. tragedy
3. secretly
4. realize
5. embarrassing

1. Pictorialists were fond of employing out of focus quality.

>> correct

2. One of the saddest tragedy of modern society is he is my lecturer.
>> One of the saddest tragedies of modern society is he is my lecturer.

3. He got a birthday present of his mother secretly.
>> He got a birthday present for his mother secretly.

4. The last thing he will realize is she doesn\'t love him since the beginning.
>> The last thing he will realize is she hasn\'t loved him since the beginning.

5. His joke was quite embrrassing for elderlies.

>> correct

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