04-09

2019-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. food poisoning 2. will hold 3. unforgettable 4. swore 5. whine 1. Mary Mallon is infamous for an unintended food poisoning spreader in history. 2. Trump said he will hold another summit with North Korean leader Kim Jung Un soon. 3. It will be remembered as one of the most unforgettable moments in the history of humanity. 4. Three heroes swore under the peach tree, which is called \"桃園結義\". 5. No one entitles you to whine. If you don\'t want to work here, just go home.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. food poisoning
2. will hold
3. unforgettable
4. swore
5. whine

1. Mary Mallon is infamous for an unintended food poisoning spreader in history.
>> correct

2. Trump said he will hold another summit with North Korean leader Kim Jung Un soon.
>> correct

3. It will be remembered as one of the most unforgettable moments in the history of humanity.
>> correct

4. Three heroes swore under the peach tree, which is called \"桃園結義\"
>> correct [But this is another meaning of swear. I wanted to you to use swear/swore, which means say bad words.]

5. No one entitles you to whine. If you don\'t want to work here, just go home.
>> You aren\'t entitled to whine. If you don\'t want to work here, just go home.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기