04-10
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. sue
2. in that time
3. delayed
4. detained
5. possess
1. The prosecutor sued out a confiscation warrant but denied.
>> The prosecutor applied for a search warrant but it was denied.
2. In that time, when Matrix was released, they were called Wachowski brothers but now called Wachowski
sisters.
>> When The Matrix was released, the Wachowski sisters were called Wachoswki brothers in that time.
3. The releasing date of \'Airpods 2\' has been delayed in Korea.
>> The release date of Airpods 2 has been delayed in Korea.
4. As a result of the investigations, the artist \'J\' was detained but it lasted only three days.
>> As a result of the investigations, the artist, \'J\', was detained but it lasted for three days only.
5. I\'m afraid to say but your son doesn\'t seem to possess talents to arts.
>> I\'m afraid to say this, but you son doesn\'t seem to possess any artistic talent.
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