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2019-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. elaborate 2. fond of 3. aim to 4. condescending 5. self-centered 1. Elaborate tricks sometimes look witch crafts. 2. She always says she is fond of drawings but I\'ve never seen she drew something. 3. He aimed to be a professor but he couldn\'t make it and now he is a convinience store owner. 4. In most cases, condescending people are actually not informed. 5. Accroading to the recent reaserch, the self-centered tendency might not be originated from their personalities.

강사 첨삭

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1. elaborate
2. fond of
3. aim to
4. condescending
5. self-centered

1. Elaborate tricks sometimes look witch crafts.

>> Elaborate tricks sometimes look like witch craft.

2. She always says she is fond of drawings but I\'ve never seen she drew something.
>> She always says that\'s she fond of drawing, but I\'ve never seen her draw something.

3. He aimed to be a professor but he couldn\'t make it and now he is a convinience store owner.

>> He aimed to be a professor but couldn\'t make it and is now a convenience store owner.

4. In most cases, condescending people are actually not informed.

>> correct

5. Accroading to the recent reaserch, the self-centered tendency might not be originated from their personalities.

>> According to the recent research, self-centered tendency might not have originated from a person\'s personality.

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