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2019-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. all at once 2. uneasy 3. abortion 4. indicate 5. talk back 1. I though he started to run all at once but I know now, this dog which is biting my leg off made him f[이름]. 2. He finds himself uneasy but time is too late to quit. He closes his eyes and takes a deep breath. He storms a mike with a nervous smile. 3. She whispered herself, the abortion was an undodgable choice. 4. Every clue indicates Colonel Mustard killed Peacock with the gun in the living room!

강사 첨삭

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1. all at once
2. uneasy
3. abortion
4. indicate
5. talk back

1. I though he started to run all at once but I know now, this dog which is biting my leg off made him f[이름].
>> I thought my friend started to run at once, but I realized that this dog, which is biting my leg off made him f[이름].

2. He finds himself uneasy but time is too late to quit. He closes his eyes and takes a deep breath. He storms a mike with a nervous smile.
>> He finds himself uneasy but it\'s too late to quit. He closes his eyes and takes a deep breath.

>> Note: The last sentence is confusing.

3. She whispered herself, the abortion was an undodgable choice.
>> She whispered to herself that abortion was an unavoidable choice.

4. Every clue indicates Colonel Mustard killed Peacock with the gun in the living room!

>> correct

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