[04.13] HOMEWORK 4

Q. Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer. Since I was young, I have dreamed of a beautiful house where I can live with my beloved family. Therefore, I would like to build a house and a huge garden with the land. When I imagine it... It is a 2-floored-house with a white wall and made of stones. The overall tone of the interior house is white and black. And it is decorated with modern items such as Scandinavian drawings. When I stand on the terras, I can overlook the whole bright green garden. There are peony floweres smell so wonderfully. Wind is blowing softly and it touches the laundry hung on the rack. Just being at this beautiful house makes my day !

Good job [이름]! ^^ You have a knack for writing. You should probably be a writer. ^^ Wonderful job in describing your dream house and, you know, dreaming in such detail would make it easier for you to achieve this. ^^ There are just some hitches with the words used but all in all, the best essay I have ever read from a student. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     Since I was young, I have dreamed of a beautiful house where I can live with my beloved family. >> Eversince I was young, I have dreamt of a beautiful house where I live with my beloved family. Therefore, I would like to build a house and a huge garden with the land.>> CORRECT When I imagine it...It is a 2-floored-house with a white wall and made of stones. >>  I imagine a two story stucco house. The overall tone of the interior house is white and black.And it is decorated with modern items such as Scandinavian drawings. >> The overall motif of the interior is black and white, decorated with modern art such as Scandinavian paintings.   When I stand on the terras, I can overlook the whole bright green garden.>> When I stand on the terrace, I can overlook the whole, flourishing, green garden.   There are peony floweres smell so wonderfully.>> There are peony flowers that smell so wonderful.   Wind is blowing softly and it touches the laundry hung on the rack. >> The wind is blowing softly making the laundry flutter on the rack. Just being at this beautiful house makes my day ! >> Just living in this beautiful house makes my day!