04-15
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. ecstatic
2. intellectually challenged
3. target for
4. all together
5. all at once
1. Greenberg\'s ecstatic critiques about American modernism arts had been devoted to draw attention of the art sociaty from Europe to America.
>> Greenberg\'s positive and excellent critiques about American modernism arts had been devoted to draw attention to the art society from Europe to America.
2. It is a story about an ordinary mother and her intellectually challenged child.
>> correct
3. It was disclosed that he targeted for assassinating her reputation.
>> It was disclosed that he targeted her for character assassination.
4. This series of revolutions occurs all together in the 1930s.
>> This series of revolutions occurred all together in the 1930s.
5. Clashes between two ranks happened all at once without any omens.
>> Clashes between the two ranks happened all at once without any omens.
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