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2019-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. defector 2. escapee 3. safe zone 4. arrest 5. turn over 1. Just one single defector can break down whole platoon in battlefield. 2. Escapees from North Korea, living in South Korea currently, sometimes were found dead all at once. 3. For North Korean refugees, South Korea isn\'t a safe zone. 4. He became a detective for saying \"You are under arrest!\". There is no other reason. 5. Public opinion will be turned over completely if it is revealed.

강사 첨삭

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Cheers!

Jean

1. defector
2. escapee
3. safe zone
4. arrest
5. turn over

1. Just one single defector can break down whole platoon in battlefield.
>> Just a single defector can break down a whole platoon in a battlefield.

2. Escapees from North Korea, living in South Korea currently, sometimes were found dead all at once.
>> Some escapees from North Korea who were currently living in South Korea were found dead all at once.

3. For North Korean refugees, South Korea isn\'t a safe zone.
>> correct

4. He became a detective for saying \"You are under arrest!\". There is no other reason.
>> His only reason for becoming a detective is to say, \"You\'re under arrest!\".

5. Public opinion will be turned over completely if it is revealed.

>> The public opinion will completely turn in his favor once the truth is revealed.

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