04-23
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>> What natural disasters are common in your country?
The typhoon was the most frequent natural disaster in Korea.
It occurs approximately 2 or 3 times per year, especially within July to October.
Recently, because of the rise of the fine dust, the typhoon was dethroned.
The fine dust affects more than 90 percent of the days of the year.
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>> What natural disasters are common in your country?
The typhoon was the most frequent natural disaster in Korea.
>> correct
It occurs approximately 2 or 3 times per year, especially within July to October.
>> correct
Recently, because of the rise of the fine dust, the typhoon was dethroned.
>> correct
The fine dust affects more than 90 percent of the days of the year.
>> correct
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