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2019-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. falling-out 2. misbehaved 3. sophomore 4. supportive 5. point out 1. They still have lots of arguments although, they\'ve been through so many falling-outs. 2. She is the last person who realizes that she is considered as a misbehaved kid. 3. When I was a sophomore, that building didn\'t exist yet. 4. Curtis was very supportive to take dignity of American Indians back. 5. She pointed out to me I misused the conjunction \'and\'. She said, it can only be put in the middle of sentence in formal writing.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. falling-out 
2. misbehaved
3. sophomore
4. supportive 
5. point out

1. They still have lots of arguments although, they\'ve been through so many falling-outs.
>> They still have lots of arguments although they\'ve been through so many falling-outs.

2. She is the last person who realizes that she is considered as a misbehaved kid.
>> She was the last person who realized that she is considered as someone who would misbehave. 

3. When I was a sophomore, that building didn\'t exist yet.
>> When I was a sophomore, that building didn\'t exist.

4. Curtis was very supportive to take dignity of American Indians back.
>> Curtis was very supportive in the taking of American Indians\' dignity back.

5. She pointed out to me I misused the conjunction \'and\'. She said, it can only be put in the middle of sentence in formal writing.
>> She pointed out to me that I misused the conjunction \'and\'. She said it can only be put in the middle of the sentence in formal writing.

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