0401homework

2019-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 May

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HOMEWORK: State your opinions. Do you think scientists will produce a mechanical heart one day that will be able to work forever? Answer I think so. It will be produced by a scientist before long. Because the science is developing more and more as the years go. Now, as soon as the Fourth Revolution Era comes, the robots start working instead of humans. We already know it through the news. It is so serious. And I think terrible that. We usually say that robot is Artificial Inelligence. It will drive, count at mall, and work instead of humans. In the future, there is nothing for a humans to do.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for doing your homework [이름]! More high-tech robots will be invented in the future

but I don\'t think that it will be good if humans just do nothing.

Have a good day! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I think so.

>> CORRECT

It will be produced by a scientist before long. Because the science is developing more and more as the years go.

>> It will be invented by a scientist soon because science will be more enhanced in the future.
 Now, as soon as the Fourth Revolution Era comes, the robots start working instead of humans.

>> As soon as the Fourth Revolution Era comes, robots will start working instead of humans.

We already know it through the news.

>> We have already heard from the news.

It is so serious.

>> CORRECT

And I think terrible that.

>> And I think that\'s terrible.
 We usually say that robot is Artificial Inelligence. 

>>  We usually say that robot is an Artificial Intelligence. 

 It will drive, count at mall, and work instead of humans.

>> They can drive, count, and work like humans.

In the future, there is nothing for a humans to do.

>> In the future, humans will have nothing to do.

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