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Thanks for doing your homework [이름]! More high-tech robots will be invented in the future
but I don\'t think that it will be good if humans just do nothing.
Have a good day! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
I think so.
>> CORRECT
It will be produced by a scientist before long. Because the science is developing more and more as the years go.
>> It will be invented by a scientist soon because science will be more enhanced in the future.
Now, as soon as the Fourth Revolution Era comes, the robots start working instead of humans.
>> As soon as the Fourth Revolution Era comes, robots will start working instead of humans.
We already know it through the news.
>> We have already heard from the news.
It is so serious.
>> CORRECT
And I think terrible that.
>> And I think that\'s terrible.
We usually say that robot is Artificial Inelligence.
>> We usually say that robot is an Artificial Intelligence.
It will drive, count at mall, and work instead of humans.
>> They can drive, count, and work like humans.
In the future, there is nothing for a humans to do.
>> In the future, humans will have nothing to do.
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