0407 homework
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> Why is English fluency significant for you?
I think that English fluency is significant for my carreer as well as my life. Many good companies want job hunters to speak another languages like Japanese, Chinese, and also English these days. As for me, to get good company and to improve my career I have practiced English speaking continuously.
Most of all, I want to understand words in English to suit circumstance and then speak suitably. Also, I want to communicate with foreigners in job or travel and also anywhere. I hope to communicate the meaning fluently i want to say to listener. I can\'t assure to get a job in foreign country later but if I have a chance, I want to catch it. As a result, just English is important for my future.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. English fluency is definitely not easy especially for people living in a non-English speaking society, but it is possible. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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>>> I think that English fluency is significant for my career, as well as my life.
Many good companies want job hunters to speak another languages like Japanese, Chinese, and also English these days.
>>> Many good companies want job hunters to speak another language like Japanese, Chinese, and also English these days.
>>> OR: Many good companies want job hunters to speak other languages such as Japanese, Chinese, and also English these days.
As for me, to get good company and to improve my career I have practiced English speaking continuously.
>>> As for me, to get in a good company and to improve my career I have practiced English speaking continuously.
Most of all, I want to understand words in English to suit circumstance and then speak suitably.
Most of all, I want to understand words in English to suit circumstance and then speak suitably.
>>> correct
Also, I want to communicate with foreigners in job or travel and also anywhere.
>>> Also, I want to communicate with foreigners in my job or travel and speak it anywhere.
I hope to communicate the meaning fluently i want to say to listener.
>>> I hope to communicate the meaning fluently what I want to say to the listener.
I can\'t assure to get a job in foreign country later but if I have a chance, I want to catch it.
>>> I can\'t assure is I could get a job in a foreign country later but if I have a chance, I want to catch it.
As a result, just English is important for my future.
>>> correct
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