04nov2024_homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Some pieces of art sell for millions of dollars. Why are some people willing to pay so much for a piece of art?
answer:
I\'ve been thought deeply about it, I think it\'s possible.
because some pieces of art is created from individual, the price is the hard work of the producer.
I don\'t know about painting, there\'s a painting that makes me feel comfortable just by looking at it, Then I think I will want to keep it and pay as much as I want.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! There might be an emotional connection between some people and some artworks. But, I guess the artist\'s reputation is also another crucial factor in determining an artwork\'s value.
-T. Sonny
I\'ve been thought deeply about it, I think it\'s possible.
>>I\'ve given it a deep though and I think, it\'s possible.
because some pieces of art is created from individual, the price is the hard work of the producer.
because some pieces of art is created from individual, the price is the hard work of the producer.
>>It\'s because some pieces of art are created by an individual and are priced based on his or her hard work.
I don\'t know about painting, there\'s a painting that makes me feel comfortable just by looking at it,
I don\'t know about painting, there\'s a painting that makes me feel comfortable just by looking at it,
>>I\'m not an expert in painting but some paintings could make me feel comfortable just by looking at them.
Then I think I will want to keep it and pay as much as I want.
>>When that happens, I think, I will want to keep it and pay for it at any cost.
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