05/02 homework

Hi there [이름]!

I hope I got your exact point here.

Kindly go over the corrections below.

See you in class.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

[How communication is changing between people]

At the past, we talked to others by direct phone call or meeting.

>>> In the past, we talked to other through direct phone calls or meetings.
 But, Nowadays, we don\'t need to talk with my tongue. 

>>> But nowadays, we don\'t need to communicate using our mouth.
 Many people is talking by e-mail or social network system.

>>> Many people communicate through emails or social network systems.
 It means we can talk by character, not speaking.

>>> It means we can talk through applications on our device.
 Sometimes, sending e-mail take me have a time to think seriously. 

>>> Sometimes, sending emails give me time to think seriously.
 And, it could reduce the mistakes. 

>>> And it could reduce mistakes.
 But, sometimes, talking with just character conveys wrong intention.

>>> But sometimes, using characters to convey messages can lead to misunderstanding.
 So, we can upset to others, even it\'s not true.

>>> So, we can upset others without our intention.
 We must adapt the changing society, but, simultaneously we have to think about the balance between the past and future.

>>> We must adapt to the changing society, but simultaneously, we have to balance they way we communicate with others.