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2019-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. the problem had something to do with 2. inability 3. delectable 4. I don’t like the idea of 5. waiting in a long line 1. LTE systems were premature to be commercialized. The problem had something to do with price of equipment. 2. Sorry for your inconvenience. We must confess our inability to help you. 3. Issei Sagawa said on the air, she was delectable. However, all we know, delectable, in his expression, didn\'t mean only she was gorgeous but very delicious. 4. \'I don’t like the idea of the conventional relationships.\' She utteranced at the court as a divorce suit. 5. To my superise, with her, waiting in a long line wasn\'t boring at all.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully. 


 


Cheers!

Jean



1. the problem had something to do with
2. inability 
3. delectable
4. I don’t like the idea of 
5. waiting in a long line 

1. LTE systems were premature to be commercialized. The problem had something to do with price of equipment.
>> It was premature to commercialise LTE systems.  The problem had something to do with the price of equipment. 

2. Sorry for your inconvenience. We must confess our inability to help you.
>> or: Sorry for the inconvenience. We must confess our inability to help you. 

3. Issei Sagawa said on the air, she was delectable. However, all we know, delectable, in his expression, didn\'t mean only she was gorgeous but very delicious.
>> Issei Sagawa said on air that she was delectable. However, we could tell from his expression that not only did she mean she was gorgeous but also very delicious. 

4. \'I don’t like the idea of the conventional relationships.\' She utteranced at the court as a divorce suit.
>> \'I don\'t like the idea of conventional relationships,\' she uttered at court during the divorce trial. 

5. To my superise, with her, waiting in a long line wasn\'t boring at all.
>> To my surprise, with her, waiting in a long line wasn\'t boring at all. 

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