05-10 Home work

2012-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I prepared some food. 2. I met withmy family. 3. I wemt hiking at the Mt. 4. I played golf at the driving range. 5. I surviving family worship. 6. I watched the base ball game. 7. I made kimbab. 8. I was talking with my family. 9. I watched TV. 10. I clean up the house every day.

강사 첨삭

Great job on your homework. Though it would\'ve been better if you had made it into a composition or in paragraph form. Nonetheless, go over the corrections I\'ve written down ^^. Have a fun-filled day ahead! T. Aurora 1. I prepared some food.>>Correct!2. I met withmy family.>>Correct!3. I wemt hiking at the Mt.>>I went hikin on a mountain.4. I played golf at the driving range.>>Correct!5. I surviving family worship.>>I did some worship with my surviving family members.6. I watched the base ball game.>>Correct!7. I made kimbab.>>Correct!8. I was talking with my family.>>I talked with my family.9. I watched TV.>>Correct!10. I clean up the house every day. >>I cleaned up the house every day.

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