05.11 homework

2018-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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What is the most important thing you should considerate in terms of making decisions? In making important decision, you should know what do you want to do in the future. If you are an university student, you can experience many school program like exchange student with another countries. It will also take lots of time and money, you should make up your mind if you really want to participate the program.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mandy!^^

How are you?

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

Anyways you did a great job answering your homework

Please check you corrections below! ^_~

In making important decision, you should know what do you want to do in the future.

>> The most important thing you should considerate in terms of making decisions is you should know what do you want to do in the future.

If you are an university student, you can experience many school program like exchange student with another countries.
>> If you are a university student, you can experience a lot of school programs like you will be an exchange student with other countries.

It will also take lots of time and money, you should make up your mind if you really want to participate the program.

>> Correct!

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